ویدیوی شماره 15 - مقدمه تسک دو - تصحیح و فیدبک

ویدیوی شماره 15 - مقدمه تسک دو - تصحیح و فیدبک

ویدیوی شماره 15 - تصحیح و فیدبک تصویری مقدمه رایتینگ تسک دو آیلتس

Introduction 15 of 101 Introductions (3)

Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Paraphrase

driven: drive

profit and economic growth: profit and economic expansion

some argue that: there is a growing contention that

addressing: tackling

 

Thesis Statement

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. In my view, neither side is mutually exclusive and both need to be amalgamated to ensure a fair and just society.

 

Introduction Paragraph

The drive for innovation often stems from the pursuit of profit and economic expansion. However, there is a growing contention that innovation should prioritize tackling social and environmental issues. In my view, neither side is mutually exclusive and both need to be amalgamated to ensure a fair and just society.

 

رایتینگ کامل و مقدمه های تصحیح شده را در ویدیوی استاد کوین مشاهده بفرمایید.

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