ویدیوی شماره 16 - مقدمه تسک دو - تصحیح و فیدبک

ویدیوی شماره 16 - مقدمه تسک دو - تصحیح و فیدبک

ویدیوی شماره 16 - تصحیح و فیدبک تصویری مقدمه رایتینگ تسک دو آیلتس

Introduction 16 of 101 Introductions (3)

Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city centre. Public transportation like buses, taxis, and metros are advised.

To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Paraphrase

Some cities: Some city centres

vehicle-free days: special days

private cars, trucks, and motorcycles: all private motorised vehicles

public transportation like buses, … are advised: travellers are advised to take public transportation

 

Thesis Statement

To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? While this may well improve air quality and traffic flow temporarily, in my view, the interruption to business and inconvenience to residents outweigh the benefits of this scheme.

 

Introduction Paragraph

Some city centres have special days when all private motorised vehicles are banned and travellers are advised to take public transportation. While this may well improve air quality and traffic flow temporarily, in my view, the interruption to business and inconvenience to residents outweigh the benefits of this scheme.

 

 

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عالی. ممنون از کوین و پیمان

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Thanks, Taban!