ویدیوی شماره 14 - مقدمه تسک دو - تصحیح و فیدبک

ویدیوی شماره 14 - مقدمه تسک دو - تصحیح و فیدبک

ویدیوی شماره 14 - تصحیح و فیدبک تصویری مقدمه رایتینگ تسک دو آیلتس

Introduction 14 of 101 Introductions (3)

The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now.

What problems will this cause?

What can be done to solve these problems?

Paraphrase

towns and cities: cities and towns

-  previous centuries: centuries ago

-  more suitable: perfectly suitable

-  people: inhabitants

-  in those times: centuries ago

-  livable: (also liveable)

Thesis Statement

What problems will this cause? limited accessibility and outdated infrastructure

What can be done to solve these problems? adequate funding and political determination

 

Introduction Paragraph

There are many cities and towns around the world built centuries ago that, although once perfectly suitable for their inhabitants, now they struggle with limited accessibility and outdated infrastructure. While these problems may seem insurmountable, adequate funding and political determination can pave the way for effective solutions.

 

 

رایتینگ کامل و مقدمه های تصحیح شده را در ویدیوی استاد کوین مشاهده بفرمایید.

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