Paraphrase

• food produced from within their own country: home grown produce
• should only sell: should be sold
• imports from overseas: food imported from overseas

Thesis Statement

To what extent do you agree or disagree? In my view, while this would benefit a country's farmers and be “green”, this policy is likely to lead to shortages of many items we take for granted as available all year round.

Introduction Paragraph

It has been said that only home grown produce should be sold in supermarkets rather than food imported from overseas. In my view, while this would benefit a country's farmers and be “green”, this policy is likely to lead to shortages of many items we take for granted as available all year round.

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