Paraphrase

v  In some countries = In some parts of the world

v  ……….. for people = People …….. (change in order)

v  owning a home = own a home

v  rather = rather than

v  very important = more important

v  positive= beneficial

Thesis Statement

Why might this be the case? the reasons for this are mainly cultural

Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? it is beneficial for the owners for personal and financial reasons

Introduction Paragraph

In some parts of the world, people consider it to be more important to own a home rather than rent one. I believe the reasons for this are mainly cultural and that in general, it is beneficial for the owners for personal and financial reasons.

جهت سفارش 101 عدد مقدمه و موضوعات بازنویسی شده به صفحه سفارش کتاب مراجعه کنید.